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Jordan's Workouts Ch.5
The day after Jordan's date is not quite what she expected. 
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Really like this story. Jordan's a real sweet character and I enjoy her attitude. Can't wait to see this develop further.

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Still Waiting
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Are you planning on doing an actual part 6?

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great! Want more parts of her interacting with her friends and trying to fit into places and what not. Waiting for part 6!

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Story was well written, I enjoyed it a lot, just seems like it took a while to get to any actual BE. Although now that I know it's there, I look forward to the next installment.

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