When her parents disappear, a properly-raised young woman has to travel back to their disreputable onabeast breeding farm in the distant north to support her siblings.
--I contacted FrigOfFury with Dexter Sinister and amanDDa's feedback, and she graciously made a revision with some more BE material.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.60
- Characters: 3.80
- Technical: 3.80
BB47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absolutely fantastic! I wish there was even more!
Jobber
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
It's the same story as the game Breeding Season. Did you write it first? Or did they write it first? Or did you both copy from somebody else?
Vadelent
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I really enjoyed this and I quite happen to agree with the others on your other post. I really would like to read the rest of the story.
Amazing
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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