When her parents disappear, a properly-raised young woman has to travel back to their disreputable onabeast breeding farm in the distant north to support her siblings. There she finds out why it's disreputable, and learns all about breeding from both sides of the stall door.
The author (FrigOfFury) gave "complete license for anyone else to do with it as they will", so I'm uploading it here because it has a lot of BE.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.86
- BE: 3.29
- Characters: 4.71
- Technical: 4.71
BB47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Probably one of the best stories on this site.
castor
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wheres the end??? I don't care that her breasts shrink in the end. They were so big the whole story it would be nice for her to have something manageable. Please finish! I must know what happens!!
Also, for some reason Word renders some of the first characters of random sentences that have quotation mark as Chinese. No idea why.
FOF
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Hello! FrigOfFury here, rating my own story so I can comment. I'm really flattered that people would like to see the rest of the story. Unfortunately, the rest is incomplete and needs a lot of work before it's ready to go out in the world. I'm also not sure if people here could forgive the fact that Bonbon's tit growth goes entirely the wrong direction so she can walk around on her own, dance and other things like that.
I'm actually now working on a story in the same world for an Overflowing Bra regular reader, but once that's done, I can return to working on Bonbon's story if people still want it despite the rather limited and sometimes reversed breast growth. I might also write an alternative ending where Bonbon's ending is less happy but much 'bigger', if people prefer that. Cheers!
ihhb
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I want the rest. Seriously, not cool.
Eth
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I would like to see the rest of the story honestly. Otherwise I greatly enjoyed it up til the omissions!
Dexter Sinister
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
So nice to read a story that doesn't take away the protagonist's humanity to service the tittilation of the reader.
amanDDa
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love this story and I'll read it again.
This is right up my alley because I am sub and love things like this.
The BE description is lacking.
Even without the BE it was a good read.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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