The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Mirktzel
jdschorr@gmail.com
Jake and the WPP
My first story, very inspired by the MasterPC series.

Jake is visiting his inlaws with his wife Alice.  He comes across the Word Power Processor.  Already having fantasized about breast expansions and reading many stories, he has some ideas on how to make this a wonderful trip.  Witness what happens when a man has ultimate control over four already busty sisters.
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Thanos
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is one of my favorite stories I've ever read and I truly hope you consider writing more like it.
Eddie
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absolutely wonderful fantasy, kept me enthused all through to the end. Write more.
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