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The Overflowing Bra

Shadow3259
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Jordan's Workouts Ch. 3
Time for an appointment with the doctor. What news will she have for Jordan.
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Hurry up with the next chapter! Loving it
 Greenion
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
I like the story that you're developing. Can't wait to read more. I was also wondering if you'd give a quick description about her features such as eye color and maybe her shoe size.
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