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Join Jordan in her struggles through everyday life. Sometimes when your built like this girl, regular activities become a workout.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 2.00
- Technical: 1.00
Aitchbee
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
Interesting idea, deliberate pace, but way too many spelling & grammar errors which kept me from getting into the story. I suggest you find a good editor.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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