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Rachel and her greedy boyfriend find a genie that decides to put them both to the test. For those not interested in story, the expansion doesn't occur until the very end.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.40
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.10
- Technical: 4.30
8reaper1
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
in my mind this is the perfect story... with the one exception, it ends way too soon. please, please write more.
the thing I loved the most was that the characters are real in their reactions. I dint stop and think why the fuck did you do that even once while reading this.
Jason G
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
hope there's a sequel in the works! i like your style and how everything's speled right and doesn't look like it was run through google translate. ;) keep up the good work!
Squigy
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Question - Is this for the guys or gals?
sizegoddess
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Loved the story and hope there is more to come.
unknown
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Beachball boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I really liked the story & hope there will be more. I hope the boyfriend mellows out some... Or even a sentencing to become a Djinn, lost forever???
anon
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A bit of a stilted start, but the style settled down after a while and found its groove. Not bad.
JG
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
Even Mary Daly would find the portrayal of the boyfriend laughably ridiculous and infuriatingly misandric.
Ninja In The Night
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Most folks forget, that expansion is only fun when both parties are involved, not forced.
layman
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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