The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Lily: Part 1
A very quick, very short BE story. Honestly just trying my hand at writing what I like, and possibly setting up for more chapters.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Best story read in a long time. Only wish it was longer with more description. Cant wait for more.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Short but very enjoyable. I'd like to second a flashback to learning of her abilities.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Incredible! I really enjoy both when the characters get to control the growth and lose control! Very thrilling and hot story. I hope you continue writing. If I get to make a request, I'd love to see a prequel exploring when she first discovered her powers

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