The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Volt Namazuros
Taking The Magician's Load: Grace's Massive Melons Finally Revealed!
When Grace came up with her plan to make it big, she probably didn't imagine things ending up like this...

(Note!  Like in all my stories, there's more of a focus on transformation themes.  That being said, there's still quite a bit of breast growth in this one, probably the most I've ever written.  Still, just wanted to give fair warning, and I hope you enjoy!)
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

please, more stories with this magician...

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I'm only marking off for furry transformation and the process by which she shrank. I didn't follow it.
glad Volt shared this here and over at mcstories as well. Some truly excellent breast expansion in this story and some hot sex scenes too.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Did enjoy.

Really liked control aspect. Want more.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I love the whole control thing.
Being turned into a bunny with boobs.... not so much.
Well written.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I didn't feel the same way MysteryGuy9215 did.

Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

I wanted to give this story a fair chance, maybe try something out...and I'll say that the thing that disturbed me was not the transformation - it was the non-consensual stuff. While it may not be a big deal to some, it was a huge turn off for me personally.

Your writing style, however, is excellent. The BE that you did - however brief - was exceptionally done, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. From there though, it just got more and more uncomfortable for me to read. I may just be a lightweight with this sort of stuff, but I thought I would throw another opinion into the mix

Overall: While this story definitely isn't for me, it is still very well written, and I commend you for that. Well done.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I really liked Marvello's style! You don't read a lot of stories like this written in first-person perspective. The humiliation aspects were hot.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

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