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Two sisters work on their mother's famous cookie recipe for the holidays. Unfortunately for one of them though, the secret ingredient comes from some more personal prep-work.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.25
- Technical: 4.25
Enigma24
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Something about this story really worked for me. Breast expansion and lactation with a purpose is very sexy. I'd love to see a sequel or another story in the same universe!
G-man001
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
More from this author would be so welcome! A soft touching breast expansion and lactation story. A clever concept, but I didn't understand the ending.
Anyways keep up the great work and post more!
Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Nice, touching story of sisterly love with a little B.E. thrown into it. Not bad.
MysteryGuy9215
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
This is quite a nice little short! Overall, I greatly enjoyed seeing something breasts and lactation focused on here in such a long while.
Few issues I had: I wish you had gotten into a bit more description with the size. I realize it was overnight expansion, but I had a sort of hard time imagining some of the sizes she was at, especially when she first woke up. I was also hoping you were gearing up for a bit of fun at the end, but unfortunately, I was left a bit disappointed. But Shannon's panic and reactions were enough for a satisfying resolution.
While some may see this as "too short", I'd say its the perfect length for a story such as this. And technically flawless as well, I didn't find one spelling or grammar error! Great work on this, can't wait to see what else you come up with.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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