The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Miss Lany
Holiday Cookies
Two sisters work on their mother's famous cookie recipe for the holidays. Unfortunately for one of them though, the secret ingredient comes from some more personal prep-work.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Something about this story really worked for me. Breast expansion and lactation with a purpose is very sexy. I'd love to see a sequel or another story in the same universe!

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

More from this author would be so welcome! A soft touching breast expansion and lactation story. A clever concept, but I didn't understand the ending.

Anyways keep up the great work and post more!

Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Nice, touching story of sisterly love with a little B.E. thrown into it. Not bad.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

This is quite a nice little short! Overall, I greatly enjoyed seeing something breasts and lactation focused on here in such a long while.

Few issues I had: I wish you had gotten into a bit more description with the size. I realize it was overnight expansion, but I had a sort of hard time imagining some of the sizes she was at, especially when she first woke up. I was also hoping you were gearing up for a bit of fun at the end, but unfortunately, I was left a bit disappointed. But Shannon's panic and reactions were enough for a satisfying resolution.

While some may see this as "too short", I'd say its the perfect length for a story such as this. And technically flawless as well, I didn't find one spelling or grammar error! Great work on this, can't wait to see what else you come up with.

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