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The Overflowing Bra

The Disappearance of Timmy Warner (Part 4)
A young man with a thing for big breasts meets a witch in an online chat room who magically grows her breasts to impress him. The conclusion to an ongoing series.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
While the quality of the writing was pretty good I did find the story lacking on some parts. Mainly that when it came to the actual expansion it was an incredibly simplistic description. Also, I think if the story was longer you would've been able to flush out the characters more.
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