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The Overflowing Bra

tusdine
tusdine@gmail.com
Same Difference: Chapter 16
Contains one (1) final chapter. Serving size: far too much for one person to handle, but fun to try anyway. Contains 1000% of your daily value of BE and AE. Warning: story manufactured in a facility that processes peanuts.
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SapphireBlueHearts
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

This chapter, as always, is filled with excellent expansion descriptions. It was great fun to read, and very arousing to imagine. You must feel proud and relieved to be finished with such a long, well written story as this one. Same Difference is still one of my favorites. I still love Tara and Kara, and enjoy their sexy kinky adventures in growing out their assets.

I have to say, though, I was a little disappointed at how 'brief' this ending felt. Emily shows up, her motives are questionable, but we don't find out anything more about why she chooses to do or say what she says. I wish more time had been spent exploring her character. She's super smart now, but to what ends?

The girls' expansion, while very enjoyable to read, just seemed so hollow when compared the rest of the story. They're growing just for the sake of growing at this point, and living inside a series of ever bigger 'hangers'. I really don't have any alternatives to offer up, but I feel like the girls needed more of a deeper explanation of why they wanted to grow themselves to ludicrous proportions, besides the fact that they like it.

Great work, Tusdine. I look forward to reading more stories from you.

Chuck
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very entertaining. I like the details when the house got wrecked. Don't want to give too much away though. And hopefully the troll will get his IP address blocked soon.

Deviant737
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Ignore the comment below; pretty sure that guy's just a troll.

I'm not particularly into the building-size expansion side of things, but I have loved this entire series, and thought it ended as it should have. The slow progression has been the best part, and, being a hips guy as well, this was a perfect blend of niches for me. The actual expansion was excellently described, and the constant sexual tension and general delayed gratification was pretty masterfully handled.

I feel like a bit more could have been done with the added character at the end. Her apparent asexualness was a little weird in an erotic story, and a bit of a turn-off. I also absolutely loved the moment when the two sisters first kissed, and it would have been awesome to have had more exploration of the burgeoning sexual relationship between the two. But really, this was an excellent series; probably one of my favorites here. Keep the stories coming!

Smart Guy
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 1

Almost absolute shit. Still shit though.

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