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The Overflowing Bra

A Gift and a Test Part 3: Las Vegas
The much-delayed third chapter! Given fantastic dick-related, breast-expanding  powers by the titular Gift and Test, Jack starts a new life in Las Vegas, where a mysterious woman known as The Madame has created The X, the largest brothel for empowered prostitutes in the world. He meets new friends, gains new powers, and uses his abilities to make thousands upon thousands of girls bustier, earning disgusting amounts of cash all the while. Yes, things are looking up for our hero - but an errant act of actual superheroism may prove to be his undoing. Also contains Part 1 and Part 2.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Extraordinarily penis centric writing.  But it's awesome!! The BE is there in spades but very dependent on his amazing cock. Hot, hot, hot!
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great stuff! I have been waiting for a series like this for quite a while. Keep up the good work.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is, by far, my favorite series of stories. The only thing I could possibly ask for is faster updates. You're an amazing author, and I really hope you see this one through.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Excellent! Keep doing what you are doing and you will make a lot of people very happy.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This story is a work of art. I absolutely love the believable first person dialogue and your descriptions of sex are amazing. Your creativity and thought that goes into coming up with each Class X power is incredible. Question: will we ever get to see other men with Class X powers? I don't recall seeing one in the story yet. Anyways, keep up the good work! I can't wait to see how our protagonist saves the world with his super-penis!

Inanna bannaa
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

MOre of Cassandra and more IN cassandra.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This story is just silly. Please continue though.

Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I re-read parts 1 & 2 with 3 last night. This is among my favorites on this site. It's an interesting world, believable and likable protagonist, and hot, to boot.

I vaguely remember a "mm" (male muscle growth) tag at the front, but only saw a hint of that. Was excited when you discussed the "almost amazonian" woman, thinking it was a power --- perhaps it might yet show up, involuntarily and out of control? Be a hot plot twist for a gym junkie like myself.

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I love this story so much. I am actually sorry to only be able to give a '3' on the BE Description. What you do describe is AMAZING, it's just that you don't describe that many of them.

Still, DON'T CHANGE ANYTHING. Just keep writing this story. :)

Hands down the best I've read on this site so far and I honestly check at least once a week looking to see if the next part is up.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This series is easily my favorite series of the last several years, and deserves a spot even among some of the old classics. Well written, inventive premise, and just plain /hot/. Keep it up!

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

I never, Not EVER leave reviews to things on this site... however I thought I'd drop a line on this Awesome Story.
It's a little heavy on the PE and not the actual BE, but I like the powers aspect of it all. That should be explored further with some more in depth sideline characters.

Overall, I'll give it a B+

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

10/10, MOAR.

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