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The Overflowing Bra

Shyguy
duanpepe@hotmail.com
The Disappearance of Timmy Warner (Part 2)
A young man with a thing for big breasts meets a witch in an online chat room who magically grows her breasts to impress him. Part 2 of an ongoing series.
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 scotesr
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
This storyline is the type I like.
Keep this series going. Maybe combined chapters would make it more cliff hanging. I loved it.
 an
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
It's just depressingly short. Two pages and one sentence of breast expansion does not a decent chapter make.
 Smart Guy
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 2 
Almost absolute shit.
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