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Morgana the witch learns to not look down on others.
-Note- While there breast expansion and a large focus on large breasts, it is not the central aspect of the story. So just giving you a heads up! Thanks for your time and any feedback is welcome and appreciated.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.50
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 3.75
BB47
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
It started out great, then your flowery word play started turning me off. I love small women with huge boobs, but I'm not really into balls worship, or whatever that was. Good technique, good descriptions, weird twist.
sysop
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great Story Volt.
Now can you PLEASE write Part II of "Halloween Sucks?" :)
Nanashi
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Your desire to use every term possible to describe breasts, penises, testicles, asses and everything else, in every single line, makes the story utterly unreadable.
The Light Fantastic
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Interesting! Certainly not the sort of story you read every day, even on here.
I liked the transformations and the various mental changes she went through. I will say that towards the end it felt a little like you were more focused on finding synonyms for breasts and testicles than the story. It did fit well with the humiliation theme though.
Definitely your best story yet, though, and certainly in the top tier of stories on here. Keep writing!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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