Part 2 of the story. It's the day after. Chad just wants to relax and smoke up, but Sky has other plans. Includes part 1.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.75
bleh
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Honestly this was easily one of the most entertaining stories I have read on here and the characters are highly entertaining. This story is a lot of fun and I can't wait for the next instalment.
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The narration "style" is just so comical to me. I would enjoy a bit more description but I also think it is fine as is.
MrHHH
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really like how you're setting up the Character development of the protagonist.
Red
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent! Good story, good writing, but really needs some detailed descriptions. Add that, this is a real winner.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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