(Also includes Part 1) Aliens, superpowers, metapenis, you know the drill. An increasingly ravenous and desperate Kandi has brought Jack on a Caribbean pleasure cruise - but how much pleasure is too much? Jack stretches the limits of his newfound powers as Kandi stretches the limits of the dresses and bras she stole from her mother, and both stretch the limits of their relationship to the breaking point. (Part 2 of what I now think will be a four- or five-part series in the end. This seafaring section of the plot kept expanding - pun intended - as I wrote it. Thanks for the kind feedback on the first part, and enjoy this one!)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 4.90
- Technical: 4.95
Amadeusmyth
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Too short! But also Great, looking forward to more, hoping at least once or twice he really pushes the limits.
Nick
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Man, I'm impatiently waiting for part 3! Each day I'm checking this site to see if it's online yet ! :D can't wait !
Silvergoose
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story. Looking forward to part 3!
BB47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
BAD ASS story! I only have one request. Please don't burn yourself out. Pace yourself... take your time so that you finish this whole story arc. Don't worry about "pleasing" the reader, or speeding up the action.. write what YOU want to read.. we will be fine with that. Take time to fill out the characters and go down rabbit holes or whatever you want. This is a complete world that you have created, so please.. take the time to explore it. Go into other characters if you need. Create other sub stories. Make it last as long as you can.. it's that good!
MelonMorph
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic. One of m favorite stories on this site!
I really enjoyed and appreciate the pacing. I knew what kind of things were inevitably going to happen, but they were presented in a surprising way. Very thoughtful story structure for erotica.
RedGunner
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
high quality, lengthy and interesting. Enjoying it a lot.
Spathicblond
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
I could use a bit more description during the acts of what each person looks like. Fantastic fuck fest (and great fall out of what happens when that's all there is) but honestly I'd forgotten everyone's basic physical descriptions. Some reminders would make them feel more real.
Can't wait for part 3!
Lover of BE
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent! Can't wait to find out how he saves the world with his magic dick!
GiantAmongMidgets
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I've read almost every story on here, and this is definitely one of my favorites. Very creative story with tons of possibility. No noticeable issues in grammar, and the BE is quite descriptive. Also, I'm sooooo glad you haven't gone with another white knight main character (as is popular in this genre), but a more realistic guy.
xtra123
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
g
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I typically don't write reviews, but you've gone 2 for 2 in your last story submissions. Finding a writer that blends a great story line and catering to this this fetish is an uncommon occurrence, and I wanted you to know that. Keep up the great work!
Cylinder
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
*spoiler*
Really liked the character development and how Jack felt guilty and apologized even when Kandi continued to be rude.
Can't wait for chapter three.
I Think
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Interesting characters, interesting world, interesting descriptions, quite good technique... There are places here and there where you might possibly consider changing a word to polish further, but sheesh this was an awesome read!
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Simply awesome! Thank you so much for continuing the story.
I particularly appreciated the "-1" scenario with boob growth, so she can continue her escapades without fear of becoming nothing more than a life support system to a giant set of immobile boobs.
I appreciate when authors keep their characters in proportions that are able to interact in the normal world or to be slightly superior (e.g., muscle growth but not muscle bound, very slight giant, etc). When people get TOO big (muscles, penis, boobs, sheer size, whatever) such that they can not longer get about properly or interact with normal people, it ceases to be fun to me. (Well, unless it's a well-deserved punishment.)
Anyway, this s easily one of the better stories here, being both hot and with legitimate 3-D characters. And a plot.
My deviant mind already has lots of ideas where to go with this, but I am deeply hesitant to make any suggestions re: plot, as it is so darn good, so I won't.
WritingBitch
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
If I could rate this higher, I would. Please never stop writing... ever.
mirjirj
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome. This is a worthy sequel and I am definitely hooked for the next part. Keep them coming!
Anony
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Great story really looking forward to the next chapter
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Just about perfect! Can't wait for the next three parts.
Geoffk
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesomwe sequel. Enjoyed it just as much as the first part. I am definitely looking forward to future installments.
Great BE, Hot sex and generally great all around.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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