The Overflowing Bra

i like the story, but........it was to short. :-(

A very bland, unsexy story. Not much I can say can top what G said, but your "character" didn't feel like a person at all. Might as well have been a mannequin expanding for all we knew. It reminds me a lot of morphs or 3D model expansions where there is no emotion whatsoever on their faces or posture. That may be arousing to some, but to others, such as myself, its very boring and unsexy. Please try a bit harder with the next story. Work on characterizations and scenarios, rather than just "she expanded, The End". It will make your stories stand out if you put a little creativity into them, rather than just using buzz words that relate to BE.

I fapped harder to G's comment than i have all year.
This story however, felt like a cold shower.

Because your story only uses visual description it just falls flat. It reads along the lines of "At first there were boobs, and then they got bigger." To immerse a reader you need to play to more than just the eyes.
The character is masturbating. How does she feel? You write, "With a yell she let her orgasm go ... it just kept building more and more. She was going nuts from the sensation." What exactly does that mean? What's the sensation? How does this woman orgasm? Is she gulping ragged breaths between loud cries of pleasure that drown out the slick squelching of her probing fingers? Are her eyes screwed shut while she struggles to hold onto her sense of self as it drowns away in wave after wave of electric heat? Is her body seizing and releasing with each powerful throb from her core? Has she broken out into a dripping sweat and soaked the sheets with a mixture of salt and girlcum?
The same goes for the breast expansion. She quickly grows to the size of beanbags. How does that feel? Is their immense weight making it harder to cry out in orgasm their mass presses harder on her chest? Does smoothing her hands over their expanding bulk elicit uncontrollable shivers? Does tugging on her turgid nipples send shocks down to her clenching pussy?
I hope you get the idea.