The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

The Orange Mask
monkeys.1997@hotmail.com
After School Club
A duo of short stories involving Josh and his after-school adventures. While this is the same setting as New School, this involves different characters, and each is its own separate "timeline" (i.e. the stories aren't explicitly related).
Anna: Another student invites Josh over to help her on an essay, but soon turns into more of a handful than he could've imagined.
Extracurricular Activities: A teacher gives Josh a very special reward for his hard work in her class.
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DrKnow
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

My favourite up and coming author on this little corner of the web. You are fantastic good sir! Keep up the amazing work!

MoonSugar
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

More excellent stories from you! As a definite believer in bigger is better, I do kind of wish that the girls got even larger but ah well. The stories were well-written, short and to the point. I can't wait for you to attempt another long story like the first New School! Keep writing!

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