"What happened, Luke?" Shannon asks as she stares at her boyfriend's now 8 inch cock. Shannon and Luke wake up one morning to discover that all of their sexual acts have unexpected after-effects...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.71
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 4.29
Anonymouse
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
This sounds like a carbon copy of Unexplained Additions... Lame
anon
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
same old, not descriptive enough.not very sexy, sounds like a copy.
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Simple and erect. Er, "direct." Nice.
BTW, your "sonic growth," is among my all-time favorites.
Dexter Sinister
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Lily Bunny
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Welcome back, Guhbone. It is very good to see you writing again. I must be honest though, this isn't really one of my favorite stories of yours (mainly because I hold your stories very highly). I have never been much of a fan of people controling how they grow and they can poof themselves back to normal. Its almost as if the story itself didn't ultimately matter. Though I will say this is one of the better stories of this kind out there. While I would hope to see more stories like Drug Trial and Additions Explained, I still enjoyed this story for what it was.
I really do love your stories, and I hope you keep writing for us.
The Light Fantastic
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Excellently done. Nothing fancy, nothing elaborate, just a good little smutty expansion fic. Characters were a little generic, but you wouldn't really have wanted them otherwise.
sizekingdom
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is everything I want in a story. Perfect.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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