Forty years after the previous events: saucy Lilian the brunette barmaid (and cook, and housekeeper) of David’s Inn at the coastline butts heads with a guest when the strange blond girl that came in late at night gets all flirty with seemingly ageless David … and what about the mermaid giantess about to attack a boat far out at sea? -- Well, that's it: the last part of my mermaid saga! A little less story, a little more "interaction" this time. And yes, maybe I shouldn't have played around that much with the timeline. If you agree (or not), feel free to tell me so in a comment. ;-) -- HTML, 22,000 words, aaaand it's a wrap!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
intangir
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Your stories are just my favoritest sort of bodily fantasy, and it's great to see more of Barbara and David!
Poor Lilian, though. She tries to compete with the sexual abilities of Barbara and Cha'gura, but her vanilla humanity doomed her from the start. But at least she got what she wanted in life!
smartz118
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I don't know who you are, but these stories make my penis harder than diamond. Especially your descriptions involving tongues.
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very exciting stuff :) Thanks!
Glenn
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A great wrap-up to the series. Thanks for sharing; it was quite enjoyable.
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