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The Overflowing Bra

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Jehana
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 Rhthrt
Overall= 2, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 1 
I just read The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo by Stieg Larsson and I really eyenojd it. I loved the character of Lisbeth Salander because she was very intriguing and you never knew what she was going to do next. It was a great mystery page-turner and a perfect summer read!
 Wolf
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Quite good, but the characters and BE could of done with more depth
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