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The Overflowing Bra

tusdine
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Same Difference: Chapter 15
I really don't want to give too much away: Kara's in danger, Tara needs lots of help, and some major changes are going to take place...
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Epic
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Fucking Solid. See what I did there?

SapphireBlueHearts
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I came into this chapter wondering what to expect. I haven't enjoyed the last few chapters of Same Difference as much as the first 10 or so. It's still a great story, and it's still one of my favorites. The last few chapters, though, have just become so sexually focused. When I read through chapter 13 and 14, I just began to wonder 'Is this story, composed by one of my favorite expansion authors, devolving into just an endless sex romp?'

I am much more pleased with how this current chapter came together. I feel like you are getting back on a track. Sure we all want sexual, giant tits and ass fun, but it was the characters and the story that I enjoy the most. Chapter 15 feels like it is much better thought out than the last couple of chapters which seemed more like 'filler' and 'fluff'. It's good to see the story progressing again. Very nice work, as always. I look forward to more.

Reviewer
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

MysteryGuy9215 writes stories about males growing huge breasts and expects for us to like them. In a stunning display of hypocrisy, he then gives this story, one out of the best series involved, a 2 out of 5 overall because he thought there wasn't enough female BE in it. Newsflash, moron: the entire series has B.E. in it.

If anything, it's clear that you are stewing in resentment over how Tusdine can weave a tale more interesting than the bizarre and unerotic drek that you upload to this site.

MysteryGuy9215
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is a good setup for a part that I may actually find interesting. Your writing style is good, but the BE is practically non-existant, making this more of a sex story than a BE story. I have nothing against sex, but I feel as if that has kind of taken over this story, which is disappointing. Your writing style is excellent, if not just a bit over-technical in places, and by that, I mean that it goes into minute details that do not relate to the girls a little TOO much. I know this is a slow expansion, but when you have a story so serious with so little humor or light-heartedness in it, it becomes a drag to read. At least for myself. But keep up the awesome writing, it has still been an interesting read nonetheless.

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