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The Overflowing Bra

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Tess 4 - Tess Is Put Up for Sale
	“Tess,” The Mistress said, stroking the large wall of one of Tess' breasts fondly.  “Ohhhh.  Tess!  I am so sorry to tell you this, but.. but...” The Mistress wiped a tear from her eye, “I can no longer afford to keep you here at the spa.  It is a matter of economics, Dear.”  And so the bids for Tess commenced...
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Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
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