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Big changes need to be made around the house, due to the twins' big changes. Fortunately, Jim is always around to lend a helping hand... and more.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Mouse
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Could you please put these out in RTF or DOC format instead of TXT format? It's not great for reading.
As always, this chapter was excellent. Love the characters, love the BE, love it all.
Cuddlebeam
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
goulyfan
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Haha nice just when you think you've got it figured out, something unexpected happens! Well done, just like all great stories this only one problem: it's over too soon!
Epic
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Always stoked for more! I regret I haven't found time to make more illustrations for this. Know that however long I take to get there, it will happen.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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