The Master PC program can change anything about you, for better or worse. Naturally someone's going to try to hack it...another long story, so you know.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Corllengatu
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is very well written, and the characters are the best kind of low and self-interested - I hesitate to give it any down-marks at all. However, the premise doesn't really allow for this to be a real Master PC story. The changes made by the program are few and far between, nothing ever really gets out of control, and no one has anything done to them or modified about them that they didn't expressly consent to a paragraph beforehand. A good little 'consentual change' story, with some good moments of convincing people that you have it - but the characters are far too sensible and cautious to give it that same 'holy shit this thing changes all of reality' sort of feeling.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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