What would you do if you woke up enhanced, and so did she? How did you get this way? What's the real reason this happened? Another long one, actual story. Warning - a gruesome scene towards the end, but it can be skipped.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.20
- BE: 3.80
- Characters: 4.40
- Technical: 4.40
TC26
Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Was loving the story up until the end, was left a little disappointed by the turn things made. It was getting better and better and then...well, not going to detail the plot here.
Gman001
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Superb effort! Loved the dream stuff. Keep rocking the preg!
OL69
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I join Jovian16. Very well written. But the physical description could have been better. It is your story, but if it were mine, the principal male role should have been lucky with all his collegues or nearly. Also more often than one time (Kimberly). And why was it contagious? It should not.
pi
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
One of the best. I mainly enjoy true slut characters like Kimberley 'having a man on each arm'
Jovian16
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very well written! You know how to put together phrases. Only critique is that the physical descriptions were a bit lacking - I had a hard time actually following the growth/expansion over the course of the story. Oh, and also, DDD is bigger than E; E = DD, F = DDD.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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