As before, all chapters are included in the .zip file. In Chapter 5, Erica and Beth finally get physical, though there are a few complications. The two girls reveal deep feelings for one another, and Beth tells Erica about her family's secret, mystical past...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.67
- Technical: 4.67
Kongstar
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome Story so far, thanks man. :)
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This story is going to be one of those epics. It really taps into the most exciting fantasies. Please keep going! :)
HomeStarRunner
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Very interesting story, I really like the characters. If you could work more sex in, that would be great as well!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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