The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Four of a Kind Chs. 0-5
As before, all chapters are included in the .zip file. In Chapter 5, Erica and Beth finally get physical, though there are a few complications. The two girls reveal deep feelings for one another, and Beth tells Erica about her family's secret, mystical past...
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Awesome Story so far, thanks man. :)

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This story is going to be one of those epics. It really taps into the most exciting fantasies. Please keep going! :)

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Very interesting story, I really like the characters. If you could work more sex in, that would be great as well!

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