After a long delay, here is the latest chapter in the epic futanari saga of Erica Richards. To make up for the lateness, this is the longest entry yet, and I've included all previous chapters as well in the zip file. There's more BE in this one than previous, and things start to get really steamy between Erica and Beth...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.29
- Characters: 4.86
- Technical: 4.86
l
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
xtra123
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great premise. Great story. Now, on with the show!
jones
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
great so far. can't wait for the next chapter!
Cato
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love your character design. Although I'm not too fond about the four breast thing, the penis growth and masturbation session is very well done. For me, there is enough BE, and the recurring deflation and inflation is great. Can't wait to read more.
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really incredible. Great ideas, great descriptions, and terrifically extreme. I look forward to rereading this as I wait for the next installment :)
CleavageCuddler
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Finally. I've been waiting for the next chapter quite eagerly. I was hoping for more variety in the BE, but I knew what I was getting into. Besides, what is there is well done and leaves me wanting more. Aside from the general grammar errors there's not really much else to complain about in this chapter. I wished the story was longer, but it ended right were I'd expect. And to be honest it is a pretty decent length chapter so no kudos lost for that. Please keep up the good work. I look forward to your next installment with great anticipation.
john
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Not near enough BE as promised. I was also hoping the two girls would get it on already in this chapter.
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