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Happy Valentine's Day! Here's a collaboration between myself and 1cygnet over on DeviantArt. I cut this version down to only have BE and a bit of Belly, so I hope you all enjoy it!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.38
- BE: 1.50
- Characters: 1.50
- Technical: 1.63
naomi
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
the actual, unedited story is actually pretty good and worth a read.
i'm not sure why the edited version exists at all--somehow i don't think the original is going to get shoo'd away from here for having weird sex in it.
the link at the end of the pdf looks shifty but just leads to the posting on deviantart, not a paywall.
spathicblond.deviantart.com/art/Valentine-s-Day-Bonus-434275197
eragon
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
lilhasselhoffer
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
"I chopped it down to just the BE and some belly" is what I read.
What I downloaded was an "illustrated" story that has some BE in the last two paragraphs, and is listed as part 2 of an ongoing story. This is another piece of advertising, that you shouldn't give any time to downloading.
Avoid this time sink. Avoid this "author's" attempts to sell crap here. If neither of those bothers you, then avoid this story because it has no real content.
again?
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Is this site moderated at all? Does it just exist for free advertising?
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
box
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
Anonymous
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Posting part of a story and putting the rest behind a paywall is ridiculous.
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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