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The Overflowing Bra

Hans21
Lomnas@outlook.com
Decent Lust Update
Hello again, im updating the story of decent lust, i have read your previous reviews and i hope you like it. Dont worry im still working on chapter 2. 
I hope i have managed to make the breast expansion more elaborated but its difficult since English is not my first language. 
However im also updating in order to change the email direction i posted since i put it wrong and it seems that is impossible to get an answer from the webmaster or the forums for changing it. Seriously, are they still alive?. 
Well anyways hope you enjoy and please give feedback as to what you would prefer to see or how too improve. :) 
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Eddie
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 2
Gorgeous story. I wanted more more more! 

Thanks for at least using spell check. At least the wrong words are words. Tong should be Thong. Poodle should be Puddle.
tipsyGrammarian
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

Pretty good for ESL! One thing: tiny ass-flossing panties are called thongs, not tongs.

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