A new acquisition at the museum has some strange effects on the guests. | Update: I didn't realize the .txt would mess up formatting, so here it is in an .rtf.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.17
William.Starfox
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
The introduction of the characters was haphazard. By the middle of the story I didn't know who was whom. There were several "professors", so things got confusing for me. The technical portion could have been better "the thick walls of the museum wall" is an example of the awkward writing style. I will say that it was a good plot, but the execution of it could have been much better.
Roid Abuser
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This was a very well-written story, although the ending disturbed me a bit. Bit of a cuckhold theme which I do not enjoy.
masterSpz3
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
loved it, too few stories include AG without venturing into the weird stuff, and yours was just right. Please write more in this genre.
Kalymna
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Yo dude I loved your story like fuck but maybe I'm a little biased since it includes basically all of my favorite kinks?? I dunno, shit owned, keep it up, write more, thanks in advance.
Mop707
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Really enjoyed the premise of the story. The growth and xforms could have used some more depth, but enjoyed all the same. Hope you write additional chapters and look forward to any future works.
The Fisk
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I realize there are two competing entries here. I'm giving this an honest score.
The physical changes could have been beefed up, but they were still REALLY GOOD to begin with. It really picked up at the end.
There were many people, but really only 6 named characters, including Sammi at the end.
I felt the 'preg' tag could have been left off (I didn't mark down for that).
Honestly, this was superb. I hope you two write something else!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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