A new acquisition at the museum has some strange effects on the guests.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.60
- Characters: 3.60
- Technical: 3.80
pobblebonk
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
No problem reading it, very descriptive. I enjoyed the story too, though the point at which the TG happened was left a little ambiguous.
magellin
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I personally thought this was a great story and I hope to see more of your work in the future.
As for you guys complaining about notepad, just open the txt file in a browser!
daelon
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
The story itself is good. I will agree with the other reviewer that a notepad file is not the best method for uploading. I know I had to copy and paste it over to word to read it. Also, it was difficult to follow some of the characters in the beginning. I know there were a couple times where I wasn't sure who exactly was doing what.
All that aside, the actual premise and the story were really enjoyable. There are some good bimboization elements and some decent sex scenes. I hope the authors continue writing and work on some of those issues mentioned because there is some definite potential.
cynicalviking
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
Rather disappointed overall. The formatting is absolutely horrible, I tried it in Jarte and in Word 2010 with moderate luck. After reformatting it, it was still nearly unreadable due to poor punctuation and spacing. I don't want to spend my time formatting your story so that is my review for now. Keep writing, it does get better if you put the effort in.
Anon
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
only wish it were longer with more descriptions of the transformations
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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