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After a long day of work, a woman relaxes and fantasizes about an erotic encounter. Soon her fantasy is becoming reality.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 5.00
MorningGlory
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great shorter type story. I liked the ongoing build-up and the writing was excellent. Towards the end the sizes got a bit more vague, but it was not a bother.
@93%: Funny to see you point out your tablet's failure to open one of the oldest text formats around, and then blame it on Macs. RTF is a Microsoft format, which first appeared in 1987.
Yes, it is a proprietary format, and something more open would be preferable, but overall .rtf is well supported on PC. And less so on mobile devices, I had trouble on an Android dev as well.
So @Someone (and other writers) please try to use PDF, DjVu or plain text (.txt) if you can? Pretty much anything can open PDF, and the document looks the same on anything as well. Most word processing apps can export to PDF nowadays as well :)
deus
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Excellent. I admit, I was a little apprehensive at the start, since it feels like you are just dumped into the story. However, any concerns evaporated as I read on and was entranced. Thank you for writing, and for sharing.
93%
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Congratulations on being one of the 7% worldwide Mac users. I, however, am not. So... can't read it on my tablet yo.
Matt
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Awesome story, loved it. Short and to the point. Wish you had better descriptions than these vague "monstrous" and "huge" tits after they passed volleyball size.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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