A new BE story about a college-aged dickgirl who meets a woman her age who is more than meets the eye--and what meets the eye is pretty unusual!
Erica, the protagonist, gets sucked into a world of fetishes and expansion that never seems to end...
This is just the beginning however, and Chapter 1 ends as Erica meets the woman of her (and our) dreams.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.92
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 4.75
- Technical: 4.92
Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This story is awesome. The prologue was a nice touch; it grips you, keeps you locked in, and has you ready to read more. Keep them coming!
Dexter Sinister
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is shaping up to be a great series. I love the humanity of the characters — more than just horny caricatures — and the beautifully matter-of-fact portrayal of intersexed people. Keep up the great work!
bobthebuilder
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
keep up the great work, great begining to a story but next time dont leace us hanging and go all out :-)
givekidsmeth
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
four tits? nice. let's get some penis/balls growth in there as well!
CrashO
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Less bottlenecked chapters please!
DiBotIcal
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Cant wait for the followup!
PeterBE
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A great start, with great writing and development. I cannot wait to see more!
dudewholikesstuff
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Lots of fun so far. Looking forward to it.
jarathaxe
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Been a follower of yours on DA for quite some time now. I've seen some of your recent posts, and I think I can imagine where this story is going to go, and I'm glad to get more of them.
Crest
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I really like the way you build up a World, and Characters. I pref real storys over plain sex discriptions.
Hope to see more. :)
phlyhigh
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
silentreader
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
You are an evil tease. Great start to this and I really can't wait to read the rest of this.
Rating based on first chapter and prologue which both lack any real BE. Characters are lacking a point only because we barely know them. Protagonist is good but we haven't seen much of her deep interactions with other.
I'm sure the other chapters will rectify these.
Happy New Year!
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