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The Overflowing Bra

New Beginnings 2
This story is an unofficial and unauthorized sequel to the Steve Palmer classic "New Beginnings."  It's also my first attempt at writing BE fiction.  Enjoy!  Feedback is welcome and encouraged.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Excellent job! I would love it if you could continue Steve Palmer's legendary "Blind Date" as well.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

True to its original form and lots of fun!

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Please, please write more. This was one of my all time favorite stores from Steve Palmer. All his stories are amazing and I couldn't really tell the difference between styles of writing. Please continue.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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