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The Overflowing Bra

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In Search of Self
When a dejected man leaves his wife and makes love to a cursed hooker, the fact that he switches bodies with her is only the start of this massive tale of curses, revenge, and true love.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Best story i ve ever read
 Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
A fairly good series (there is more than the one part; this site doesn't have them all though), that is slightly let down by being a slow story mid-way through.
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