A porn actor and his wife sign a deal with the Deep Surgery Clinic (a revolutionary medical foundation with bleeding-edge techniques) to give them perfect bodies in exchange for a cut of their profits. The deal turns out better than either party imagined, and so the couple keeps coming (and cumming) back for more...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.75
- Characters: 3.69
- Technical: 4.00
Penguin
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Could use just that little bit more
Bb47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome! But almost scary intense.
bbe
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
One of my all-time favourites!
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Now, this was awesome! Great sex descriptions. Great fantasy! Just enough plot to make the sex scense stick together like a 1980s Playboy! (I really appreciated the male improvements -- muscle and dick -- that's half the fantasy. Can't stand it when the guy remains a dweeb and fucks fantasy women.)
deus
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
I loved it. As others have mentioned, the characters were a little flat, but that didn't stop my enjoyment of it. Anyone other than the wife taking that humungous disk is ridiculous, though.
el burro
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Another set of 5's to balance the other set of 1's because some retards cant use a computer so rate down a story they never read.
Fantastic by the way, this year has certainly been better than the last for content.
biggun
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Like the story not over the top hope there is more to it seems to end so abruptly
bobby apples
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Good stuff - consensual hyper sexuality is a lot of fun :-) Please write more...
V
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome story, doesn't take things soooo far that they become too ridiculous.
Not a failure at using computers
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
There's 2 posts here rating everything 1 because they don't have the intelligence to use OpenOffice for .docx filetypes when they are downloading DOCUMENTS TO READ. Here's this to balance it out somewhat, and as an open suggestion to others like them.
n
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Can't read without office.
duffdog
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I hope you continue to write more in this style. It is awesome!
Hypereros
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
This is exactly the kind of over the top, voluntary slide into a sensual wonderland that I love. Yes, the characters are fairly flat. No, I don't care. Side note, BE isn't really the emphasis, just one component, not that I found that problematic in the least. Tastes may vary.
Duuude
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Right up my alley! Absolutely loved it!
Gnarl
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Can't read the story so no score.
Is it really that hard to post in RTF, TXT, or PDF?
Groggy
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Well writen, well thought up, The characters are a fair bit one-dimensional and a little too elysian for my tastes, but over all a good story.
on average 3.5 (good/excellent)
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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