Submission is fixed. It now includes a .DOC and a .TXT file. A nice long chapter about Samantha and Dan as they spend a week together on a camping trip. Of course, Samantha's breasts are the main activity!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.80
- BE: 4.60
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
cylo
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Was really expecting sex this chapter. That said, still great.
Correction
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Maybeenuf4u, you reviewed the wrong submission. Your review is for the story "Clarissa and the Memory Boosters". This is chapter 05 of Samantha. An EXCELLENT chapter in a story that has become one of my favorites.
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really likecthis story. The pace was somewhat uneven though I found. When she got on the bus, all of a sudden you start having clarissas beasts grow really quickly. It almost seemed that you were rushing it. IMHO. I loved the last line tho. Mammary boosters. I also loved how you had her read, but not quite understand the text. Thats a nice trick as well. It was a great story, and my comments are given to improve. I read somewhere that an author really shouldn't rush with a major plot development. Rush the inbetween stuff if you need to, but never rush the development (BE!)
Arhus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Reading the next chapter is always the highlight of my week / month.
tusdine
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Whoa!! I can't believe how long this chapter is compared to the earlier ones. Lots of activities and growth = I'm a happy camper.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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