The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Adrian Burns
Unknown
Crystal's Boob Persuasion
Another product hits the street.
Average Scores:
 Gnarl
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
I would've liked to see more descriptive (and just more) BE, but overall an excellent short story!
 Xero
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
The story was great. It's a bit on the short side, but it's a great story none the less.
 milkaholic
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
loved the breaking bad references
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