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The Overflowing Bra

tusdine
tusdine@gmail.com
Same Difference: Chapter 7
Jim's adventures with the twins continues as he transitions from one job to the next and the girls try to find something to wear in public.
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Jwduke
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

One of the top TEN here! tusdine, you CAN'T stop NOW.... I could read & re-read this FOREVER, even if it becomes (hopefully!) 1,000 chapters long! Don't stop now!!!

Epic
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

A refreshing and rare well-written AG story! Keep those undies snapping!

Clownboat
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great story! I've been following this on DeviantArt for a while and I'm liking the way the story is headed :D

Ryver8
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

These chapters can't come fast enough! Terrific story!

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