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A young man's boring job suddenly becomes a lot more interesting when a pair of sexy twin sisters move into town.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.90
- BE: 4.81
- Characters: 4.90
- Technical: 4.90
Bb47
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Requiem
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is just awesome. Enough said, can't wait to read all the following chapters.
Psycho
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A++
I wonder what will happen when the growth (inevitably) gets out of hand...
anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
looking forward to the next chapter. I can honestly say i'm hooked!
Jwduke
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is becoming one of the top TEN, I have read here! PLEASE keep this going! I liked it SO well I read it AGAIN!!!! The only thing I hope maybe happens is, Jim's dick gets a little larger for the characters!
KEEP IT COMING!!!!!!
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Truly great stuff. Haven't come across chapters this good since Kodo's early days. Keep it up!
Holy shit
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Yiz
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is superb. We need more!
deus
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Good work. For my preference, it could use more BE (more changes, but slower) and more sex. I hope you write more, I can't wait to see what's next!
Epic
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Totally illustrating this!
anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Please sir, may I have some more?
Erazor
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very good story! Looking forward for the next part!
g-man001
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Really, really good work. A fun world to be in. Hoping the next installment is fun of fertile surprises!
havingfun1077
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Thanos764
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
One of the best I've ever read. Love the balance of ass and tits.
FlashBigger
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic!! Keep it coming!
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This story is insanely sexy. It could use more SEX, but everything else is fantastic.
xjj99
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Derpdraggy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Arhus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent! Been following your story series on DeviantArt, great to see it appear here. (And tell Hattushilish to post his "Lucky" series as well, it'll be greatly appreciated here as well.)
Ryver8
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really great stuff. I hope the series doesn't stop here!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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