The far more polished second part, and the actual beginning of the story and BE. Reviews and comments are appreciated.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.86
- BE: 4.57
- Characters: 4.43
- Technical: 4.43
FleshFan
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Very good! Though short! Can't wait for part 3!
Arhus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Fantastic work; I've been checking back almost every day for the next part. MORE!
Bigger IS Better
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Hey Osse! The size of the earth is TOO SMALL for her.
I'm sure she wants to burst the Universe like her first training bra.
Osse
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Second part was amazing have been jerking off to it multiple times a day, for the past few days, hope you continue to write it, great work!
She should end up like each of her breasts are the size of earth :3
Gnarl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Best series I've read in a long time! Has me coming back daily for the first time since the 90's!
anon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Huge improvement over the first one. Very interesting
tusdine
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Even better than the first one! I love all the descriptions of her massive boobs and the ending REALLY makes me want to read more!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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