I got lured in by the title.
It took me by surprise, and I enjoyed it. Once I got past any internal dialogue about leverage and all that, I had a good time. Some of the comments on formatting are spot-on; this story would benefit from a bit of formatting polish, and it would help separate the internal dialogue from the narration.
In response to the complaints of lack of BE, it seems that this is a sort of "limited giantess" story, and the "lack" of growth didn't bother me, but there are those process purists out there.
Gonna go read the other installments later. Nice job.
3 for BE, as there is not really detailed. Also I would suggest the author to write the stories in Word for example - this story is much better than the avarage txt-story, it would deserve a nicer format :)
Writing flowed a bit strangely. Would help to put thoughts in quotations instead of randomly switching from third to first person narration mid-sentence.
An enjoyable story but merely a tease. She's already enormous, which is great and interesting and well described. You form an attachment to the character right away because she seems sexy and "a little wired."
A good tease. Wish it was longer. Can't wait for part 2. Wanna read it now.
Strange, thats why the overall 5. BE was not really described. On th other hand I'm waiting for part 2!
This was a very amusing first part, and I enjoyed the wink the author is giving to the readers. Not much BE as yet, but assuming this is an in media res, there promises to be a lot. The only spelling/punctuation error I noticed off the cuff was the missing apostrophe in the title. I look forward to the story beginning.
Ignore those who just like mosquito sized bits. There's a whole niche of nice sized breasts that is mostly empty. If i wanted to stay with mosqito bits i'd have gone to mastasia, beshine, or FDD
I liked it and hope you will be doing more. Remember, you can't cater to everyone's taste so don't even try. Ignore the ranting of one word wonders that vent their anger at the inability to fap to your stories.
not much BE since they started at collosal
got bored halfway reading it
An introduction without a story is a little odd. All of this would have been better told integrated into an actual plot.
Additionally, you should work on your pronoun usage. There was a lot of switching between a hypothetical "you" and Samantha's internal "me", which was confusing and read roughly. Generally, you shouldn't use "you" in any case other than a character actually speaking with another character.
It´s an intresting start, but i think with tits this big she can´t move them without help. I don´t like the superstrengh-idea and the BE could be more in the focus.
Great
I sense great things from this, can't wait to see more beyond the introduction!
A good start but felt more like an introduction. Interested to see where it goes.
Stupid