Further tales of the cast of Milkmaniac's The Book of Spells. Claire visits Tim to try a new sexual position to double Tim's pleasure.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 2.50
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 3.50
eldritch
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Both cute and hot. Nice job. I haven't read the previous stories, but I really like your writing style. Hope you continue. The only complaint is that there's no BE in this.
Jobber
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
Not bad, but it's based on someone else's story, and honestly it didn't match up with the style, characters, or plot of the original. That's really distracting. It would probably have been better if you made your own story.
blahblahblah
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
book of spells is one my favorite stories on this site, and the thought of someone continuing them is great. i can only hope this is the start of more chapters to come.
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
My point docking is simply to state you don't really have BE and the characters (being from Milkmaniac) are nothing new. However, do not mistake the 3's as bad. This was a fun read, and the end definitely caught me off guard.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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