HEAVY EXPOSITION THIS CHAPTER; DON'T COMPLAIN THAT THERE IS TOO MUCH EXPOSITION, YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED IN ADVANCE! Anyone remember this story? I almost didn't. So here's the next installment. After her mutation into a catgirl, Sally wishes to be left alone, but Mori Ankoku and her crew are out to expose the people who did this to her and find themselves in their own mess of trouble. (mild AG, LG and clothes ripping; and lots of exposition)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.10
- BE: 3.40
- Characters: 4.30
- Technical: 3.70
ThatOneGuy
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Enjoyable read - very interesting characters for a pr0n flick. Grammar could stand to be improved, but I've come to expect lower grammatical standards from erotica these days. BE content was good, but there needed to be more - perhaps Sally could've grown/mutated further (read as: maybe Sally can grow/mutate more in the next chapter - could be sexy). All in all, looking forward to the next instalment - Godspeed you magnificent horny bastard!
wtc
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Too much exposition, I wasn't warned of this in advance.
sw
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Really enjoyed your story. I get frustrated when people say there should be more or less of something in a story just because of this sites title. Honestly, there have been such a deficit of (good) stories here over the last few months its nice to have anything at all. Keep doing your thing, however you want to, and take every rating with a grain of salt.
wheeee
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Overall, this tale was good. When I hear it's long, I'm sort of comparing it to Elf World, which is pretty long. This was not nearly as long as that.
Enjoyment deserves a higher combined average score, hence the 5. This is not the best story on TOB, but it deserves a score above 4.
BE needs a little work. We all could stand to remember that BE is the reason this site exists. There can be other stuff, but BE is the one that has its own category, so it's a requirement.
Characters had their own personality, and reason for existing.
There were enough spelling errors to knock this down. No complaints, as I could still read it.
Lily Bunny
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
The slight use of all caps in the description completely ruined my enjoyment of this story. 0/5
Okay with all the Lolz out of the way... Very nice effort, the BE discription was a tad lacking, but I rather enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.
OAO
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'm not big on furries, but this was absolutely fantastic.
el burro
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Exactly, Jobber the description doesn't effect the story in any way you moron, the rating system isn't a downvote button. Get off your elitist ass.
Pretty average in all respects, enjoyable for sure and I'd read again but it's altogether a 3/5 for me.
That Guy
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Get off your elitist ass, Jobber, as if the 'yelling' in the description really impacted the story enough to make it less enjoyable.
Jobber
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
The story is interesting. Minus one point in every category for yelling in all caps in the description. That's unnecessary and childish.
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A good read, though heavily furry so if you dislike that then it's not for you. I'm just hoping we eventually see a Cow Girl transformation, (no udder please!) since we all know women have perfectly good milk producers already :-).
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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