Abigail always thought she'd been passed by in the size department. Turns out she was right! A fairy comes to help her out, and her brother ends up with some life changing alterations as well!
This is an older story I had written a few years back. I went through and edited what I could catch and expanded on the story quite a bit. These characters have been added to the the Universe created within The New Girl. I hope you all enjoy!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
MadMacs2010
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
On the whole, I too enjoyed the story, but, I felt the ending seemed a little rushed, however this did not detract from a good story with room to ...er... grow.
Voodoo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
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