The Overflowing Bra

Wow. "Porn with a plot" - A mythical beast has been found this day. Not just a plot but a BRAIN behind it. This was one HELL of a ride. Sadly there was a lot more plot then there was erotic sections, which had me a bit disappointed for some of the longer non-erotic stretches. I certainly enjoyed the BE, size, and pregnancy/impregnation emphasis, but I wish there had been a lot more of it! You've created a beautifully crafted universe in which I can see a whole lot more potential for erotic literature in the future - I highly suggest you open it up to other authors, similar to the spectrum of Master PC stories.
Beyond wishing simply for "more" - with an heavier emphasis on making babies and the wonderful effects that has on the female body, the technical aspects were somewhere between very well done and polished. The story encountered the typical problem that once there were more than a dozen-ish characters I often found myself thinking "wait who was that again?" and some of them really weren't all that distinguishable from one another, but in general the individuals in the story were at minimum well built. Form and technical skill at composition are out of this world compared to "the usual" -- I only spotted about a dozen cases of "wrong word" or similar minor grammatical errors. TBH I would have done much worse, so I cant complain - I'm just putting it in the review so it's out there: GOOD GRAMMER enclosed!
Overall I give this one an 8.5/10 - It's over 250 pages long, so one may have to read it in installments (I sure did), but there's a heck of a lot of content here. Downside is you have to do a lot of reading to get to the good parts so if you're looking for a quick fix, this probably isn't the story for you. There's a ship full (literally) of huge breasted women bouncing about to be enjoyed, but most of the BE takes place "off-stage" and instead most of the sexy stuff turns into scattered pockets of conception focused sex with women with huge tits. The sex could have been more vividly described, but it was nonetheless an enjoyable romp! Take an afternoon and read this one, it's well worth it!

One of the best I've ever read on this site. Excellent plot, well worth the read, and you described the sex beautifully (if sometimes short). The only thing that got me was that you didn't really flesh out what Michael did with Deanne and Megan! I really expected something to happen there, but the most I got was one epilogue with Deanne. After all the third & fourth messages you sent them, I expected something crazy.

I really liked this story. So much so that I forgot about the BE and got into the plot, which is a good thing as to be honest there wasn't much of the breast expansion, merely decisions and then results. However, I did enjoy the pregnant/belly expansion parts of the story and I would have liked to have had a bit more on out growing the clothing to show the breast growth happening, and perhaps a bit more on how the ladies adjusted to having enormous breasts. I am inclined to agree with the other critics in that the main character never looked at or even discussed with Jenna the possiblility of taking other creeds and colours with him other than White caucasions, please don't think I casting aspertions, I'm not making this a personal thing. I love the way that you described the sex but sometimes I wish it could have gone on a little longer. Otherwise a fantastic story, please keep it up. A new epic author on the scene W00T!!

Leviathan25 kind of touched on a lot of what I thought, but I only half agree with him. 
My too big beefs with the story both involve the lack of variety with the girls. 
One I'm sure they got plenty of variety in race with their samples, but it would have been nice to have some other races represented in the women he picked to go with them. 
I would also have likes to see some variety in body types. You throw around words like curvy and shapely a lot but never give much detail into what that entails. Some people might call Keira Knightley curvy, but I'm sure most visitors to this site would consider her simply an above average attractive face on an otherwise unremarkable if not overly skinny body.
More to the point, most women have some sort of insecurity about some part of their body. It would have been interesting if some of them asked to have more then their bust lines changed and the few extra health defects fixed. A small petite girl who wished for more womanly hips is not out of the question, after all wide hips have long been considered a sign of fertility. Will most educated people would say that it's just a myth, it would not stop some one from wanting to change that about themselves.
Over all I very much liked the story, and ended up staying up reading it until I finished the whole thing. With a few breaks at parts that got rather steamy.

Epic story. Like others have said, the BE is almost an afterthought. The other thing I was waiting for was the moral fallout from the MC. As it is, for a man who is concerned with not breaking up families to be so cavalier in making sure everyone is agreeable seems a touch contradictory, and no one ever calls him on it or serves as a conscience. Personally, I would have liked the interbreeding with the other race to have played more of a central role, rather than the theme seeming to be establishing a human colony. I suppose these are all preferential things, but that was the implied direction at the beginning.

Needs more description of the BE taking place, but otherwise one hell of a story. 

Not to echo what everyone else has already said, but wow. Epic. Awesome concept, great storytelling skills, and excellent visuals except for the BE.  Agreed that it's hard to describe when it takes months, but many of us come to this site for the actual act of growing, not just simply having huge boobs.  Other than a few typos or incorrect words (ie: saying that someone "waived" at someone, when it should be "waved") and small typos, my only other complaint is that this didn't need to be in pdf format.  Html would've worked fine, and have been more readable on more platforms.  For instance, i do almost everything on my android phone and hardly ever use my home pc anymore.  Viewing pdfs can be a pain sometimes even with text reflow, but html is universal and easy to work with on phones, tablets, and computers - regardless of the OS- mac, win, linux, etc.
Looking forward to future installations, or entirely new stories from you!

It is very rare for me to continue to read a BE/preg story merely for the "Story".  This was very well written and I enjoyed  it greatly!  Would love to see more, but this is already the best BE/preg story I have ever read.

This is probably one of the best stories to be uploaded here in a long long time.  I greatly enjoyed that you worked the porn into a story, rather than have a throw away story that tried to scaffold the porn.  As many others have said, the BE was a bit of a let down.  You have beautiful, meticulous descriptions of almost everything else in your story BUT the BE and the sex scenes.  There is so much more you could have done with that.  I also agree with Leviathan.  You generated a great deal of characters, and then did nothing with some of them.  They kind of faded into the ether.  Overall, excellent work.  I would like to see a bit more of the porn scaffolding the story and more efficient character development in a sequel or your next story.

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I fully agree with Kodiak
It´s a great story and it was fun to read it, but the BE is only in the backround, not very good for a BE-Story.

Very well-written and technically proficient, characters that are believable and multi-faceted (for the most part), and a fresh take on a pretty well-worn trope. A great read if you like your fap material to not insult your intelligence or offend your inner grammar nazi.
My only complaint is the relative lack of detail given to the smutty aspects. BE isn't very descriptive and while I understand and appreciate that, for once, attention is being paid to making complex, interesting characters, there's a lot of text here and very little in the way of payoff.
Still, I would read this 100 times before I read a lot of the garbage that passes for BE fiction. Great work.

I liked it. Kodiak hit all my points right on the head (ouch!).  My only other comment was that I was surprised that none of the women ever queried the computer about the shots.

This story matches my fantasies. I have always fantasized about taking women with me to an island, increasing their bustlines & impregnating them. Really loved the story. If you write another sequel, BE should be a bit more descriptive(here you have just written the size attained. A description of gradual expansion would be better), you could add more sex scenes(hardcore sex scenes would be better). The choice is yours & yours only. Keep up the good work. I am hoping for a next story of the similar kind.

Can you reup the story as a word or rtf file please. Pdf's & text don't play nice with me when it comes to preferred fonts.

I agree totally with Fred, I liked this story alot. Please keep the good times coming.
"Without chaos, there is no order."

Very long, very enjoyable story.
One of the few erotic stories where I enjoyed the plot so much that I could hardly stop reading. The idea was excellent and well executed. The style was good and errors were few and minor, a typo here, a mis-named character there (Kristine is called Kathrine at one point), nothing to really detract from the enjoment, all told.
What is somewhat lacking, however, are the (for this site) central pieces: The BE description is almost sporadic for this many women undergoing BE in one story. I know it is much harder to do proper description with slow growth, but sometimes you just kinda forget to even tell about the result. For example with Theresa we are told that she gets a second shot which (presumably) should boost her beyond Susan's size, but we are hardly told anything about how her breasts look like later. I understand that with so many women growing, some have to be glossed over in order to not let it become too repetitive, but why do you let Theresa demand a treatment to get extra big and then not describe how she develops?
The other part are the sex scenes, which vary vastly in quality. Especially in the beginning you kinda just omit it, where it might actually be interesting. Another matter is probably one of personal taste more than anthing, but I must say I found it slightly amusing that all women were not only "multi orgasmic" but also went off after just a minute of breastplay while Michael sometimes lasts forever without any problem. It's not a very big deal, but I personally tend to find it more interesting when the sex is somewhat more "realistic" or at least not over the top all the time without any real explanation.
All in all, however, this was one of the best stories I've read in a great long while. Thank you!

I enjoyed this very much