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The Overflowing Bra

Lost Wanderer- Chapter 1
She's lost, she's alone, she's naked, and she's going through some serious changes.  Watch the beautiful Noreen try to get out, get expand, and find out why everything is trying to boost her cup size.

A note from the author- This story contains very little B.E. since it's primary purpose is to set things up for the oncoming chapters, so please bear with me.  Commentary is welcome.
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Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

How about an HTML version? RTF, DOC, PDF, etc. are all a huge pain to read. HTML is much, much better for the simple structure of most of the stories on this site.

Jason G
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I haven't even read this yet but i fail to see any issue with a docx file. You don't need to buy or use ms office- google docs, openoffice, libre office, and even some apps on android and iphone will open docx just fine without costing you a penny. So please continue to publish in whatever format you want. As long as it's mainstream, people will be able to read it. If you're really worried though, you can publish in html. That will keep file size small and still allow you to have formatting and color (even images if you want) and pretty much anyone can open that, no matter what device/os they use. I mean, if they're on this site, they obviously have a browser...

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Great start, sets the scenery and ends on a cliffhanger.
I like stories that keep it simple and it's great to see some mystery added to that.
I wonder what the next chapter will bring!

About formats: .docx is a proprietary format and not everyone will be happy to use it, because not everybody wants to purchase MS Office. I personally prefer an open format or PDF above docx.
RTF is also proprietary but designed to be interchangable and other applications have no trouble using it, therefor also acceptable.

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Yes, a RTF file would be better.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Well written, and an intriguing story. I look forward to more.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Add some prolonged pregnancy expansion, some but and hip expansion, and you have everything I could want in a story, I love the total alieness of her surroundings, and the crazy little things like people leaving photos

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Can I request an RTF version?

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

pretty good start. I look forward to the next part

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