The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

I Must Increase My Bust
I wrote this story (by hand!) about 20 years ago.  I then typed it and posted it online around 1996 but it has since become difficult to find.

Synopsis:  Two girls compete for the attention of a guy by getting progressively larger implants.
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Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I remember these very fondly and still have them on my PC, although hadn't looked at them for a while.

Thanks for the reminder!

So how about "Now, I Must Increase My Bust Even BIGGER!" :-)

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A nice start. This part could use a bit of proofreading too, but it doesn't have the major technical issues of the first part. Again, I would like to see more description in the story. Hopefully you will be inspired to write another part of this!

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